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The horror, suspense, thriller online Hindi Novel registered with FWA.
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The horror, suspense, thriller online Hindi Novel registered with FWA.
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कृपया इस कादंबरीके बारेमें अपनी प्रतिक्रिया लिखिए.
आप यह उपन्यास अपने दोस्तोंको ईमेल कर सकते है.
achchhe upnyas the,maine dono padhe hain.yah prayas jari rakhen.badhayi swikaren.
ReplyDeletereally ad-bhut, last tak suspense bana raha.
ReplyDeleteye mughe bahut hi acchi lagi.
ReplyDeletemain apne dosto ko bhi is site par ke liye raffer karunga. Aap sabhi bahut accha kaam kar rahe hai. Keep it up & god bless you.
hi yah upanneyas bahut hi khoobsoorati se likha geya hai our yah koshish jari rakhkhain yah hamare lie our doosre readron ke lie hi bahut kam ka hai khas karke jo nasihatain kahi kahin note kie gaye hain so nice and betifull
ReplyDeleteyah novel black hole to much batter & so nice sare hindi novel padhne walon ke lie our khas karke jo gandhi ji ke our doosre logon ke wakeya likhe gae hain
ReplyDeletebahut achha laga jitu
ReplyDeleteyeh upnayas mujhe bahut acha laga. do prem karne walon ki dard bhari suspence se bhrpoor kahani hai. aur likhne ka tarika aisa ki padhne wala pura padhe bina chod hi nahi sakta.is tarah ka upnayas likhne ke liye bahut bahut badhai.dhanyabaad.
ReplyDeleteEk Bahot Acchhi Story jo har pal aapko jakad ke rakhe. Best Thriller.
ReplyDeleteLekhak ko Bahot Badhai
sachmuch adbhut upnyas hai.
ReplyDeletesachmuch adbhut upnyas hai.
ReplyDeletebahut hi accha upanyaas he. bahut interesting. full marks to writer. what a thinking.
ReplyDeleteIts really a tremendous story, what a suspense brilliant complete story is a suspense but ending is superb, amazing, i suggest writer(author) to give these story to film director,congratulation writer its really a 'AD-BHUT' wishing u bright success in writing novel.
ReplyDeletezhakas boss.........
ReplyDeleteamasing,amesing,amesing,amesing,amesing story muze bahot bahot bahot achi lagi iska suspense bahot hi acha tha. i like very much bas aap asaihi achi achi story post karte rahana. mai apne sabhi doston ko apka fan bana raha hu................ keep it up........
Amazing Imagination. You have a very good imagination power about supernatural forces.
ReplyDeletemein is bare mein kya kahu
ReplyDeleteek acchi story thi
pad ker accha laga
umeed kerta hu ki aage bhi aise he acchi story padne ko milegi
it is such a superb story. suspense friction revenge love and bit of horror makes it wonderful. It is a stuff of a movie.some body have to make the thriller based on this.
ReplyDeleteits really a good one i enjoyed it.i will tell about this novel to my frnds.
ReplyDeletekafi interesting kahani thi, end tak suspense tha. anyway it's a nice story.
ReplyDeleteIts an excellent story! I enjoyed a lot..keep writing such story.this is one of the best suspense story ,i ever heard.
ReplyDeleteits osam sabad nahi hai khne ke liye
ReplyDeleteosam nice novel ,suspence ki bharmar thi . agle upanyas ka intezar rahega .
ReplyDeleteBadhaai.....Likhne ka tarika to kuchh kuchh purana sa hi hai lekin kahaani ant tak baandhe rakhti hai...
ReplyDeletepadhne mein maza aaya...
Jaari rakhein.
ye book bahut sexy he, ek dam fataka
ReplyDeleteyah vastav mein ek adbhut kahani hi hai lekin dil ko chune wali hai.
ReplyDelete*****yah vastav mein ek AD-BHUT kahani hi hai lekin dil ko chune wali hai.*****
ReplyDeletebhai kasam se jabardast novel hai..maja hi aa gaya..aine ek sath 3 hrs main pura padha non stop....wah kya likha hai..bahut khub...aur aage bhi likhte rehna....hardik shubh kamnayen
ReplyDeletevery good story, i have no words to say...............
ReplyDeletebahut hi achha lajabab......thanks for providing us .....
ReplyDeleteits too good yaar...
ReplyDeletemuje bahut achhi lagi,maine is novel ko real me feel kiya..aisa lag rha tha k sab kuch mere samane ho rha hai...
for the writer wish u all the best for ur next addition..
jay nagar- what a magic thout .......touch my heart very deeply
ReplyDeletesuper story, very good, keep it up,
ReplyDeletevery very very very very very very interesting novel.......!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletecooooool horrrrrrrorrrrrrr with lots of suspense n love storyn emotions... very good n nice upnyas................ keep it up.............
ReplyDeletereally bhut acha upnayas hai
ReplyDeleteBAHUT HI ROCHAK UPNYAS THA
ReplyDeleteEK HI BAITHAK ME PURA KARNA PADA MUZE BAHUT HI PASAND AAYA............
bahut hi nice story thi har chapter ko padne me bahut achchha laga.
ReplyDeletebahi agar itna accha likhoge toh meri aadat kharaab ho jaayegi
ReplyDeleteaaj pahla din hai i website pe
aur maine 2 novels padh daale
bahut accha likhte hain aap log
keep it up
achha lga .. par anthony ko baad me jhon me replace kar dete to or achhi ban jati...jhon ko kayar na dikha kar anthony ko jhon ki jgah mra dikhna chahiye tha. aur sare kaarname jhon dwara hote to balle balle ho jati..
ReplyDeleteYE sach mai adbhut hai (Realy it is amazing)
ReplyDeleteNamskar,
ReplyDeleteYe upnyas muhe kafi acha laga aur ise maine 1 hi din mai pad liya.
I think it is one of the best novel I have read till now.... Its very good....... Hope i will find many more like this....
ReplyDeletebahut accha hain mujhe pasand aaya aur rona bhi.
ReplyDeleteUnfinable..............read it
ReplyDeleteit was very nice story . full of suspense nd thriller. we cannot imagine that who was the killer.
ReplyDeleteIt was heart touching story...It should not happen with anybody
ReplyDeleteTushar Harinkhede
Bahut hi achchi rachna thi,kabhi kabhi to ek dam real lagti thi:suspense ant tak thi.
ReplyDeletevery very nice creation ,till the end there was thrill ,mystery ,suspense .really enjoyed it
ReplyDeletekeep it up
Lekh'k M'hod'y ki vil'ksh'n pratibha ko N'm'n.
ReplyDeleteYah upanyas anoobhav ke bina nahi likha ja sakta hai, atah aapke iss mahan anoobhav ko bhi mera sadar pranaam.
Isse Padhne ke baad mere paas aapki stuti me koi shabd nahi hai. faltah ek baar poonah aapko sa't-sa't n'm'n.
Jai Hind
jitni prashansha ki jaaye utni kam hai.
ReplyDeleteLekhak mahoday ko koti koti saadhoowad....
Jai HIND
bahut hi badhiya hai...har situation ko aise explain kiya hai ki lagta hai wo hamare samne hi ho rahi haiiiiiiiii
ReplyDeleteAmazing kya dard or dil ko hiladene wali kahani mast bole to zakkkaaaas me nayi novel ka intezaar karuga
ReplyDeleteits very very nice novel yarr.
ReplyDeletedil jeet liya hai.maine kai bar padhne ki kosish ki par aj complite
hua h.
i say superb novel yar.dil jeet liya hai.
ReplyDeleteab mai new novel ka intizar karunga.
ReplyDeleteMene "AD-BHUT" novel pada. Main aapko bata nahi sakta ki wo novel mujhe kitna acha aor intresting laga.thank u so much ,aor ek cheej k liye bhi main thanks kahna chata hu aor wo ye hai ki aapne ise hindi me translate kiya... Aor main ummed,kya mujhe pura vishwas hai ki hame isi trah ache novel padne ko milte rahenge!! And once again thank u so much 4 all!!
ReplyDeletewakai me ye adbhut novel h.I really thnx to its writer
ReplyDeleteits really amazing.........ram gopal verma should make a movie based on this novel..........its awesome
ReplyDeletebahut achhe dost. aap isi tarah anya upanyso ka bhi hindi me anuwad karte rahiye. Aur isi tarah hindi ko pure sansar me failate rahiye.
ReplyDeletedhanyawad
very very nice......
ReplyDeletea very very gud novel.sach me, bahut suspense tha last chapter tak. v.gud
ReplyDeleteVERY NICE AND VERY BIG,MISTRY BOOK.KEEP IT UP
ReplyDeletemast tha. suspense se bhara
ReplyDeleteBahot badiya laga ye novel...i wish you best for future attempts.
ReplyDeletesuspense bahut badhiya banaye rakha hai... achhi lagi...ummid hai aise novels aage bhi milegi....thanks..
ReplyDeleteAKANKSHA
ReplyDeletesach me bhut jada achi novel hai ye....end me jab us ladki ko sukum mila to ye padh kr mujhe acha lg...khas end kuch or hota dono pyar krne wale mil jate....
what a fabulous novel, sir keep it up. i am waiting for your next amazing novel
ReplyDeleteits awesome ' sir jee, words me jaan dal di that's call writer....wow ...hum kitni bar dar gaye the nd ab jaan me jaan ayi very good much much ..i m waiting for new horror story...
ReplyDeleteVery nice story, love thrill suspence horror mixture of everything. Big congrats to the writer pls write more novel like this.
ReplyDeleteYe mere jivan ka pehla upanyas tha aur mujhe ummeed hai ki isse jyada acchi shuruat mere lia impossible thi mein writer ko badhai deta hoon aur veh pranshsha k patra hai
ReplyDeletemaine is novel ko padha. mujhe accha nahi bahut accha laga.AMIT CHOUDHARY
ReplyDeletethis so good I LIKE THIS STORY. sach me yah bhut saspence bhari story thi.
ReplyDeletedam good....keep it up
ReplyDeleteMaza aa gaya
ReplyDeletebahut achcha likhte hain aap
very nice story.....
ReplyDeleteemotional,love,murder and thriller...
I like it....
bohut maja aaya
Really very good story.........Hindi upanyaas ke liye ek sarthak prayaas hai...kripaya ise jaari rakhen.
ReplyDeleteosssssam novel
ReplyDelete2 din main complete kar li
I Love This Novel. i Like It Very Much Dear Keep It on
ReplyDeleteReally great.
ReplyDeletei realy like it muje umeed ne the story ka end es tarha hoga great writing ,
ReplyDeletespeechless.....mindblowng.....4 to 5 hrs me bina ruke pdhi.i want to read more lyk dat..
ReplyDeleteNice nobal
ReplyDeletejitna mughe maths padhane padne me maja aata h usse kai jyada mugh this nabal padhane me aaya......
Aaaa.....a.a...aa..........
good work
ReplyDeletefantabulous!!! i really enjoyed.please keep writing such novels.
ReplyDeleteit is really heart touching nobel......
ReplyDeletebahut romanchak upanyas hai plz aise upanyas aur share karo
ReplyDeleteIts a wonderfull story
ReplyDeleteverry good story
ReplyDelete...emotion...
ReplyDeleteBahut achhi story h......
ReplyDeleteIts one of the most beautiful n thrilled novel i have ever read. Goood work. If someday i ll get a chance to make a movie on this i ll do for sure.
ReplyDeleteJames
good one,tipical indian story
ReplyDeletereally ye Novel bahut accha tha.. romance, love, darr, emotions or suspence sab kuch tha isme.. really i like it.. thanks ye Novel likhne k liye...
ReplyDeletereally, it was a great novel and i enjoyed it very much
ReplyDeleteJab un charo ne nensi ko mara tha uske baat uski death body ka kya hua tha ..?
ReplyDeleteOwsome story
Starting bhut achhchhi h..!story k bich me thoda technical fault (Discovery channel) wala part zaberdasti joda gya laga..! aur anthony ki ko bhi !!!
ReplyDeleteOverall story interesting thi...pr thoda sa change isme jaan dal deta!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep writing... maja aa gya!!!!!!!!
nice novel...
ReplyDeletethis novel is according its name.
ReplyDeleterealy ad-bhut hi hai....nice novel..
realy heart touching story + suspense + love story + horror....
ReplyDeleteamazing brother....
keep it up....
Lovely heart tuching story
ReplyDeleteReally ye Novel mujhe bahat achhi lagi... Nancy ki badla lene ka tarika bahati hi achhalaga... aap ko meri tarfse request hai k "ADVUT" Novel k tarah or v Novel likhiye or aap ko new Novel likh kar safalta mile....
ReplyDeleteReally ye Novel mujhe bahat achhi lagi... Nancy ki badla lene ka tarika bahati hi achhalaga... aap ko meri tarfse request hai k "ADVUT" Novel k tarah or v Novel likhiye or aap ko new Novel likh kar safalta mile....
ReplyDeleteMamina Deb
yar....no words to say.
ReplyDeleteRealy heart touching. Very good job.
Really nice story Sunil Doiphode...
ReplyDeletesuprb.
ReplyDeleteNice so nice.
Ap k is novel me har ek pehlu tha.
Love story
trhil
horrar.
Owsam
बढिया, बहुत दिनोँ के बाद कुछ अच्छा पढने को मिला ॥ धन्यवाद एवँ शुभकामनाएँ ॥
ReplyDeleteSuperb
ReplyDeleteThat's great story...
Arun
Superb
ReplyDeleteWriter kon hai be.it's. A really really nice story. Hats of for writers mind. Such me very nice story & suspense. Osssam story.
ReplyDeletemeri ankho se aanshu aa gaye
ReplyDeleteGreat novel... Full thriller, horror.. Well suspenced..
ReplyDeleteReally a Aghast...
I Feel It With Heart....
ReplyDeleteI Read it with suspense..I wondered...
Amazing.....Awesome....cheTan...
Maine pura padha or achha laga
ReplyDeleteverry good
Thanks
ye dil ko chu gaya . Ye bulcul real lagraha tha . I love this story
ReplyDeleteOooo so mast
ReplyDeleteReally a great novel. Vastaw me Adbhut upanyas hai.
ReplyDeleteParantu ek baat samajh me nahi aa raha hai. Signal jab beyarhouse ke bahar nahi ja rahi thi, to wah signal katl ke waqt us control room tak kaise pahunchi, jise block kia gaya aur signal rang bhi 5 km ka bataya. Iske baare me please spast kijiye.
Nabin
yeh upnayas mujhe bahut acha laga. do prem karne walon ki dard bhari suspence se bhrpoor kahani hai. aur likhne ka tarika aisa ki padhne wala pura padhe bina chod hi nahi sakta.is tarah ka upnayas likhne ke liye bahut bahut badhai.dhanyabaad.
ReplyDeleteintrsting story
ReplyDeletekhupch chan story ahe....... pan kahi paoints ahe ki te sort jhale nahi..... 1 tr te signal kasa trach kela tyani ani 2 ticha bhau je kala jadu karat hota tyache kay jhale..... ani 3 tila marlyanantar tichya dead bodyche kay kele tyani.....?
ReplyDeletebut i love this suspense type story
Preeti Guliay
ReplyDeletevery nice ... bahot intersting he me iski story apne husband ko bhi btayi unhone bde dhyan se suna and unhe bhot pasand bhi aayi
VERY NICE BOT DINO BAAD KOI NOVEL PDA HE WO B ITNA ACHHA..
ReplyDeleteis upanyas ki koi tulna nhi hai.. awesomeeeeeeeeee
ReplyDeletevery nice novel;;;;;;;;;
ReplyDeleteamazine,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Heart-touching Story dude.... rona aa gaya yr... keep it up bro.... I hv only one word to say AD-BHUT
ReplyDeleteReally ADBHUT... Heart -touching... Horror... super Novel...
ReplyDeleteGood Luck...
Very interesting. If signal are not going beyond warehouse, how did they find location.
ReplyDeleteReally very intresting... Heart touching love story... Bole to superb
ReplyDeleteheart touching ...combination of.horror and innocent love story
ReplyDeletekhupach chan mala khup avadali novel sir shubhechaa tumhala
ReplyDeleteJhakasssssssssssssssss
ReplyDeletesoo good
ReplyDeleteit`s heart touching story...
ReplyDeleteamazing...
superb...
upnyas bahut aacha hi, very interesting & lovely .............
ReplyDeletereally very nice presentation....lovely and & heart breaking....
ReplyDeleteReally very very impresive.Nice writting
ReplyDeleteI totally admire it...........,
Ad-Bhooooooot...!!
ReplyDeleteNice script.
so good
ReplyDeletebut un charo ne nensi ko maar ke kaha rakha tha
very nice writer.. excellent. keep it up.. pls make more novels available online.
ReplyDeleteAwesome story...
ReplyDelete